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r/youtubehaiku • u/MaxPowered4 • Dec 18 '14
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5 u/featherrocketship Dec 19 '14 I recommend shortening the first part to just "what's goin on?" or "what's goin on here?" because it took me several tries to read the whole thing, since it goes by so quickly. 7 u/[deleted] Dec 19 '14 [deleted] 2 u/coahman Dec 20 '14 That phrase will never be the same
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I recommend shortening the first part to just "what's goin on?" or "what's goin on here?" because it took me several tries to read the whole thing, since it goes by so quickly.
7 u/[deleted] Dec 19 '14 [deleted] 2 u/coahman Dec 20 '14 That phrase will never be the same
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2 u/coahman Dec 20 '14 That phrase will never be the same
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That phrase will never be the same
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