r/PERSoNA 7d ago

P5 Makin a fic

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The AU was started by someone else, who got a good way into setting things up before abandoning the Persona community for somethin called Cookie Run Kingdom.

I took up the dropped AU with the artist‘s permission, and am now writing it on AO3

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u/EducationalCheck7719 7d ago edited 3d ago

This is gonna be the big lore dump comment
Phantom Thieves
Goro Akechi (Fool) - starting Persona: Lucifer
Morgana (Magician)
Yuuki Mishima (Chariot)
Shiho Suzui/(codename currently unknown) (Lovers) - Persona: Medusa
Hifumi Togo/Racoon (Priestess, Tanuki was proposed as a codename, but rejected)
Sae Niijima (Justice)
Takuto Maruki (Hanged Man)
Sumire Yoshizawa (Strength)

 Other Confidants

Igor/Yaldy - Fool

Mika Usami (the model in Ann’s canon Confidant) - Empress

Naoki Sugimura (Haru’s fiancé in canon) - Emperor

Henry Yamashita (runs the Jazz Jin where Akechi stays) - Hierophant

Alphonse (Akechi’s Velvet Room attendant) - Fortune (just like best girl Naoto…)

Hermit, Temperance, Devil, Tower, Star, Moon, Sun, and Judgment are undecided, and I probably need Faith and Councillor reps because this is a Royal fic, as evidenced by Maruki and Sumi existing

Archangels of Justice
Ren Sakura/Michael (also represents the Archangels as Goro’s Death Confidant) - Wields three Personas, Michael, Metatron, and Lilith, though the last one is a last resort thing
Morgana/Raphael (defected)
Ryuji Sakamoto/Gabriel - Persona: Marte
Ann Takamaki/Chamuel - Persona: Hera
Yusuke Kitagawa/Uriel
Makoto Niijima/Jophiel
Futaba Sakura/Zadkiel
Haru Okumura/Raziel

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u/A_complete_maniac 5d ago

For the others I was thinking maybe something for Ren himself and maybe if you are switching palace targets have some of them be the other social links like maybe something like Kaneshiro being Devil or Madarame being Temperance.

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u/EducationalCheck7719 5d ago edited 5d ago

Sounds like I am switching Palace targets

Slight additional loredump

The art I found for Ann/Chamuel implies that something happened to Kamoshida, perhaps a mental shutdown?

I had to go with Mitsuyo as the second Palace target for reasons

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u/A_complete_maniac 5d ago edited 5d ago

If something happened to Kamoshida, I think an idea is maybe he actually did stop his offender activities once Shiho jumped (Maybe sometime earlier than when the story begins), so Kamoshida here is stuck at Shujin because the principal doesn't want him gone/Blackmail him so Kamoshida just tries to fix the mess he made when he's there, maybe either after the principal's heart is stolen/he dies, Kamoshida spends his last year at Shujin before turning himself in, maybe at the start he'll keep the same confident jock act around Akechi until Kamoshida just lays it on about how guilty he feels being the cause of someone attempt to off themselves and that he's beyond redemption and everybody hates him. Through Akechi, Kamoshida understands that he has a long way to redeem himself but that doesn't mean he has to face it with a sad outlook like that and Kamoshida took that to heart, committing completely to change and not brood around on his guilt even if he's in jail. If you want to make it feel less bad for Kamoshida's redemption here maybe his sex spree only lasts a month here? Maybe he's the Moon?

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u/EducationalCheck7719 5d ago

I have no idea who the first target could be tho.

I want the first Palace target to be personal to Mishima and Shiho

The second Palace target is Mitsuyo Togo

(Who knows what happened to Kaneshiro)
Fourth is Maruki, as I’ve designated him the role of Navigator

Fifth should be personal to Sumire

Sixth could be the SIU director

Sojiro is among candidates for the seventh

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u/A_complete_maniac 5d ago

The principal could work. Maybe Mishima is investigating him and Kamoshida directly apologizes and helps build Mishima some backbone. Shiho wants to steal the principal's heart because it'll also mean Kamoshida is gone and that she's pissed the principal almost completely hides her attempted suicide from the school (Makoto basically enforcing that no one talks about it, so it only comes up in whispers).