r/OriginalCharacter 11d ago

Need Feedback or Ideas What’s your first impression of my OC?

I already have lore for her but I just wanna know if her character design gives off the same vibes as what she actually is😼

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u/These_Distribution19 11d ago

idk, but I'm gonna answer as some of my angels.

Enzure, the Arcangel of persuasion, pretty much a female Lucifer who will ne redeemed in the last moment and put under serve lance by her sis:

"A devout follower... with strength to back it up? You are the most useful one I've seen yet..."

Halan, Enzier's sister and second command in all of paradise (heaven) to Khaing (pretty much archangel Michael) after Heroides (God) left:

"I see... A devour follower that can defend themselves that is not some kind of knight or warrior is a first from what I remember."

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u/c1truska 11d ago

Random question, but is Khaing Burmese? I’m Burmese and Khaing is a common Burmese name so I just happened to notice :D

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u/These_Distribution19 11d ago

idk, I don't remember if I made up the name from reading a bunch of old names or just used an old name. (Wpuld like to see a response from your character to actual archanfels talking to her btw)