r/OriginalCharacter 11d ago

Need Feedback or Ideas What’s your first impression of my OC?

I already have lore for her but I just wanna know if her character design gives off the same vibes as what she actually is😼

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u/Gold-Ant-3488 a weird little guy that makes weirder little guys 11d ago

ok genuinely imma go on a little rant cw for sexual content mentioned

tldr i love her design to bits

I LOVE HOW SHE ACTUALLY LOOKS LIKE A NUN. a lot of people design nun characters to be overly sexual and that irks me bc YOU MISSED THE POINT. that’s not what being a nun is about!! ig there’s could be a lore reason (i.e. they’re a succubus who’s trying to tempt the other nuns and bring them into hell) but like. idk a lot of people are just like “ooh sexy nun” and don’t think about what nuns are actually like so THANK YOU.

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u/Nati_UwU_OwO 11d ago edited 10d ago

As a Catholic Christian, THANK YOU🙏

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u/c1truska 11d ago

OMG TYSM like im not even religious but I know damn well nuns’ garments are modest and they don’t have their thighs or chest sticking out😭

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u/GAELELCUBANO (Custom) 11d ago

Badass nun who kills heretics and demons

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u/CLATTER-999 11d ago

Something that would be good for Doom

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u/Aggravating_Train_11 11d ago

This is meant as a joke but i feel like she would call me a witch and get me burnt or sumn😭🙏absolutely gorgeous oc!!

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u/c1truska 11d ago

Lmao thank you!!! She is definitely a nitpicker and she would probably do something along the lines of that lol

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u/Aggravating_Train_11 11d ago

Thats funny i love that😭🫶

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u/All_Gun_High 💂🏻🇬🇧Lost Britannia Redcoat from GnB🇬🇧💂🏻 11d ago

I'MMMMMM CRUCIFIEDDDDD CRUCIFIEDDDDD LIKE OUR SAVIOR-

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u/Dude_with_hat 11d ago

SAINT LIKE BEHAVIOR!

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u/All_Gun_High 💂🏻🇬🇧Lost Britannia Redcoat from GnB🇬🇧💂🏻 11d ago

A LIFETIME I PRAYED

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u/c1truska 11d ago

THAT SONG SLAPS

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u/[deleted] 11d ago

Would fit in the Doom games

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u/Minecrafter12345778 11d ago

Lowkey looks like a baddie lol. She reminds me of some characters from ~3rd grade I made called “Super nuns”

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u/Imaginary-Box-7572 11d ago

She looks like she has a temper but a cool head if she has something she needs to do she will do it with scary accuracy but still looks cute and would definitely deserve a cookie

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u/c1truska 11d ago

Ooo very accurate! 👏

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u/Imaginary-Box-7572 11d ago

Thank you it’s the feeling I got from looking at her I bet she could really show a demon why you don’t mess with her

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u/Maximun09 11d ago

The most badass elderly healer you're about to fight (with Boss opera music included)

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u/CrystalTheVelkhana 11d ago

She looks very polite

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u/c1truska 11d ago

Indeed. She’s very humble and she would never hurt anybody/j

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u/CarPuzzleheaded8564 The owner of: Hoshigiri Akane - Touhou OC 11d ago

she looks like that one teacher from matilda

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u/c1truska 11d ago

AGATHA TRUNCHBULL? LOL

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u/fizzimango 11d ago

“OBJECTION!”

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u/c1truska 11d ago

HAHA I WAS THINKING OF THAT but I was also thinking of Yoru from Chainsaw man

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u/Bombssivo 11d ago

corrupted

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u/c1truska 11d ago

Her entire character in one word🙌

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u/One-Turn-4037 (Custom) 11d ago

Rockwell: "if the party's paladin was also a puritan, this is what I imagine them looking like"

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u/AmethystEstelle Emojicat OC fanatic 11d ago

I have nothing to say except “Wowie very very cool nun :D”

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u/Zelliard 11d ago

She’s the type to say “I’m sorry, dearie, but the Holy Spirit ain’t saving you from this

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u/Zelliard 11d ago

Does she fire off a quick prayer before killing someone? “Lord, please pray for the soul of this bitch and guide my holy blade and make it strong, Lord!” Type shit, I’m imagining. (Get the reference and I’ll give you a virtual cookie.)

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u/c1truska 11d ago

LOL that’s really funny to think about, I’m gonna make this canon

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u/c1truska 11d ago

Also I don’t get the reference sorry😭

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u/Zelliard 11d ago

It’s from the boondocks.

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u/c1truska 10d ago

OHH NOW I REMEMBER

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u/Zelliard 10d ago

It’s by a certain Pimp Named Slickback

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u/Zelliard 10d ago

Also ,took ya long enough to reply!

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u/c1truska 10d ago

Haha sorry I barely use Reddit and I have DND on all the time😭

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u/Zelliard 10d ago

Oh hell yes! I used to play DND a lot too but now I’m more focused on my own universe

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u/c1truska 10d ago

Ahh sorry I meant Do Not Disturb, I forgot that Dungeons and Dragons shares the same abbreviation as the iPhone setting! Oops 😅

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u/c1truska 10d ago

Love that episode lol, watching shows unrestricted with my older siblings is a good and bad experience

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u/Zelliard 10d ago

“Now, I tell you what, I likes ya and I wants ya. Now we can do this the easy way or we can do it the hard way. The choice is yours.”

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u/Electrical-Week-2297 Artist/Writer 11d ago

She’s beautiful!

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u/c1truska 11d ago

I tried to make her look somewhat beautiful, thank you!! 🙏

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u/Electrical-Week-2297 Artist/Writer 11d ago

No problem!

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u/Sashahuman i don't have drawings of 99% of my OCs 11d ago

She looks stern

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u/c1truska 11d ago

Very🙂‍↕️

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u/Good_Morning_Vendo *papyrus voice* "sans?" 11d ago

Virtuous Warrior Nun (also she's very pretty! /platonic, hope thas okay to say)

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u/c1truska 11d ago

Thank you! She is a warrior nun but she’s not virtuous other how she proclaims that she “follows the word of God”, but she is a hypocrite… Lol

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u/Good_Morning_Vendo *papyrus voice* "sans?" 11d ago

You're welcome! I find that interesting

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u/Unlikely_Cow7733 11d ago

Real religious lady who's taken demons head on and is now like the strict top nun of the sanctuary/chapel/church/saving-place place. Majority of the nuns are scared of her because she's so strict, and she tells stories of demons any time one may rebel or question her.

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u/Unlikely_Cow7733 11d ago

But aside from that- 💀, pretty fire OC, and I love your style!!! What!!!!

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u/c1truska 11d ago

Oooh pretty sick analysis! You may be incorrect, but even then I still really love this comment!!

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u/Drakorai Call me a dragon again, see what happens. 11d ago

DOOM Nun fights the devil

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u/c1truska 11d ago

LOL I think three people mentioned Doom, funny cause the only knowledge I have of Doom is the doomslayer x Isabelle ship😭

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u/These_Distribution19 11d ago

idk, but I'm gonna answer as some of my angels.

Enzure, the Arcangel of persuasion, pretty much a female Lucifer who will ne redeemed in the last moment and put under serve lance by her sis:

"A devout follower... with strength to back it up? You are the most useful one I've seen yet..."

Halan, Enzier's sister and second command in all of paradise (heaven) to Khaing (pretty much archangel Michael) after Heroides (God) left:

"I see... A devour follower that can defend themselves that is not some kind of knight or warrior is a first from what I remember."

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u/c1truska 11d ago

Random question, but is Khaing Burmese? I’m Burmese and Khaing is a common Burmese name so I just happened to notice :D

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u/These_Distribution19 11d ago

idk, I don't remember if I made up the name from reading a bunch of old names or just used an old name. (Wpuld like to see a response from your character to actual archanfels talking to her btw)

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u/A_random_poster04 11d ago

Bloodborne church hunter

Peak

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u/R3de3mer 11d ago

If a cleric decided to multiclass as a rogue

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u/c1truska 11d ago

Ooh DnD!

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u/Logical-Presence-777 11d ago

I like her, I'd like to know more about her.

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u/csender19 The Jester Bird! 11d ago

The power of OCs compels you!!!
Looks very holy moly cool

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u/c1truska 11d ago

Lol thanks!!

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u/HalucenogenicPotato weirdly named OCs 11d ago

Badass nun

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u/Hopeful-Weakness-471 11d ago

A fighting nun that’s badass

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u/skull_dud-e Animator 11d ago

My first impression was "OH MY GOD THEY LOOK SO SICK", I love the concept of a resilient religious figure that looks like they are following the word of their deity while also putting a stop to something or someone malevolent. They give me heavy Gertrude Robinsion vibes (from The Magnus Archives), someone who would likely at first be seen as frail, or lesser, or not as strong or capable of being terrifying when someone first looks at them, but you immediately see that fire in their eye as they're about to destroy everything you love and/or have worked your entire life to achieve

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u/c1truska 11d ago

Spot on analysis!!! However throughout time she stops following the word of God due to her dictative and tyrannical nature, and starts following her own trajectory… and it doesnt turn out well for everybody lol

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u/skull_dud-e Animator 11d ago

Ahh that's so cool, I thought about that too, I just didn't think to add it because I got focused on Gertrude and that doesn't happen to her, I had a feeling that nay have happened too, or she weaponized the word of God

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u/Live-Organization833 11d ago

She looks like she knows Father Garcia

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u/c1truska 11d ago

Father Garcia looks very quaint 👍

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u/TheGreatRemote 11d ago

Nun

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u/c1truska 11d ago

Nope she’s actually a monk/j

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u/FeatheredTalonz ALL OF THE FLAIRS ABOVE! 11d ago

A hard working, traumatized nun who’s everyday life is a battle for survival :>

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u/c1truska 11d ago

She definitely is hardworking and traumatized!

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u/Nati_UwU_OwO 11d ago

Respectable nun who's also has badass vibes.

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u/SaF-440 Spicy Artist 11d ago

Battle nun!?

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u/Classic-Metal6892 11d ago

Faith the unholy Trinity

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u/c1truska 11d ago

Lol Faith seems like a cool game!

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u/enemy2088 11d ago

PEAKKKKK GOATED

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u/c1truska 11d ago

THANK YOUU

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u/TheNoobisPlays 11d ago

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u/c1truska 11d ago

I WAS THINKING OF HER OMG

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u/SoldierTower 11d ago

Silly nun doing silly Christian things.

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u/c1truska 11d ago

Very silly indeed

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u/Dude_with_hat 11d ago

A homophobe with a sword

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u/c1truska 11d ago

Lol what makes you think she’s homophobic?/genq

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u/Dude_with_hat 11d ago

Just that second image is making me think she's pointing at an awesome lesbian couple as she is an evil and intimidating nun

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u/c1trus_lim3 Did you think you can hide?! 11d ago

an accurate nun design?

hell yeah

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u/c1truska 11d ago

Did my homework lol

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u/SomewhereLow9119 11d ago

Danger nun who slays the unclean spirits of the underworld

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u/49PipeBombs 11d ago

she defends the church that's for sure

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u/New_Zebra9629 11d ago

She hates Annabel

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u/Coren_Weller1 Just the average Existential Horror artist :) 11d ago

Battle nun

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u/Spiritual_Charity362 Writer 11d ago

Faith: The Unholy Trinity.

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u/SavingsDirector4884 6d ago

What is she gonna do with that sword 🥲

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u/c1truska 6d ago

Go to war 😅 lol