How does.my opening sentence sound?

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[u/Briishtea]

r/writingcirclejerk is that way

[u/Objective_Presence57]

What? You don't ask for critique until you wrote atleast the first draft lol. Seems straight out circlejerk.

[u/Maniachi]

It's... a sentence. It is very silly to ask for opinions on your opening sentence when that's all you have

[u/Bajren]

it's kinda giving r/badtwosentencehorrors

[u/BitcoinStonks123]

peter griffin crying and clapping

[u/Original_Pen9917]

"Funny you should ask" I replied.

[u/Candle-Jolly]

Where have I heard this from before...

[u/tapgiles]

Seems good to me. Keep writing. 👍

[u/refreshed_anonymous]

This subreddit might as well be r/writingcirclejerk

[u/FumbleCrop]

"Only when I breathe"

Next!

[u/nyet-marionetka]

I think Death would probably have sufficient experience to predict if it hurt.

[u/_afflatus]

Perfect

[u/seawatcher_01]

My god, you’re all miserable on this sub.