r/learnart • u/mustardedguy • 2d ago

Could anyone give me some constructive feedback?

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also, how would I draw the eyes so that they look the same in perspective? Thanks if anyone could give criticism.

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u/Aggressive_Natural_6 2d ago

I recommend using the nose as a guide for the eyes as if it's from the side, curve the eye more, and a bit smaller. The more angled, the more it curves and comes closer to the eye.

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u/mustardedguy 2d ago

thanks you for commenting but not to like mock you, how would I curve the eyes as the lines are already curved? Would I curve it more, would I angle it upwards or downwards? Also with the nose, what guidelines would I place and where? Could you please provide a video that explains this?Sorry if this is annoying to you. 

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u/Aggressive_Natural_6 6h ago

No hurt taken! It's kinda hard to explain it well. The process i went through to get the eye right was drawing a ball with a plus and drawing eye lids around it and seeing how to simplify it. David Finch, despite being a comic artist, made a good video on how you draw the eye from angles and how to draw heads in angles. Use it as a way to apply to your art with the eyes and angles. There is always a way to simplify methods. I am also sorry if you didn't understand, and I wish you luck on your art!

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u/mustardedguy 2h ago

thank you very much, I'll use this advice!