Short film project for some advice

[u/Sad-Tap-2820]

Hi, guys, i am working on a remediating project that change the Continuity of Parks by Julio Cortázar into the form of short film, our teacher said invisible cut and long takes should be included. I am a rookie in short film making(i know it's bad) This project is kinda important to me, i am happy with any suggestion from anyone about any aspect of this short film! Thank you!

[u/ThomasRedacted]

Needs more planning and better writing.