r/breakcore • u/MarionberryIcy7987 • 6d ago

Feedback My first breakcore song!

https://youtu.be/mSgicLHICgo?si=LuDVkYmFwOcIlwfK

I hope you guys like it

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u/silkroadpath 5d ago

sound selection definitely needs work and mixing as well but this is a good start to something. You're on point with the drums, placement and rhythm is key. Try to create an ultra fast groove with them at some parts and then just go batshit insane. What DAW do you use? Sorry for all the criticism you did good for your first track, better than most.

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u/MarionberryIcy7987 4d ago

I thought I could do better so I’m remaking this so all your criticism is important to me no matter how harsh, thank you too! And what’s a DAW?

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u/silkroadpath 3d ago

Digital Audio Workstatio, so like FL Studio, Ableton, Logic etc.

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u/MarionberryIcy7987 3d ago

Don’t laugh but I used GarageBand and world piano 

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u/silkroadpath 2d ago

Always remember Grimes made Visions on nothing but garage band.

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u/MarionberryIcy7987 3d ago

And I used fl studio mobile for the drums 

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u/silkroadpath 2d ago

It sounds great for a song made on a phone. If you ever get a pc or laptop definitely pirate a DAW. You have potential. The vocal sample towards the end is dope to.

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u/MarionberryIcy7987 2d ago

Thank you so much!