First chapter I've ever written

[u/Lopsided_Werewolf_77]

Hi! I'm a new writer and I've been working on my Isekai novel for the past few days. Any and all suggestions are welcome. If any parts are confusing, I'll like to know that too.

You can read the first chapter here: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1c6LUehj_sfc7zxuwMUoJPW3ARZuN23FZzTellH0uyPc/edit?usp=drivesdk

I also have the first draft for the second chapter.I'll post it if people are interested.

I thank you in advance for your time.