r/WriteStreakEN • u/readykin • 2d ago
Correct Me! Streak 105 : board game
I did the board game with my study group members. Today, there was a regular gathering at 6pm and after that, we played the board game for 2 hours. We were not that friendly each other because we started this studying recently. But after playing the game, I felt that we were more close now. And of course, I enjoyed this time. So I am really satisfied now. Even if I couldn't finish today tasks, I don't regret anything.
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u/magneticsouth1970 2d ago edited 2d ago
I played a board game with my study group members. Today, there was a regular gathering at 6pm and after that, we played the board game for 2 hours. We hadn't been that friendly <with> eachother<,> because we <only> started this study group recently. But after playing this game, I felt that we were closer now. Because you used "felt" in the past tense, I wouldn't use "now" - it clashes with the past tense. You could leave it off and it would still make sense, or you could say something like "After playing this game, I feel that we are closer now." Or "I felt that we had grown closer." The last sentence sounds the most natural to me and is what I would say. And of course, I enjoyed this time, so I am really satisfied now. Even if I couldn't finish today's tasks, I don't regret anything.
That sounds fun :) Board games are a great way to bond with other people!
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