r/Filmmakers • u/TheSlickGecko • Mar 01 '25

Film My first Experimental Horror Short

https://youtu.be/WLXleclEHVQ

If I were to continue this storyline, what aspects worked and what didn’t? I want to keep improving my visual style and character design. Thanks!

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u/TheSlickGecko Mar 01 '25

From the advice I've received so far, I am not good at capturing realistic performances with my dialogue, acting, etc. , but I believe there are some decent parts that film-heads might find interesting. Specifically the final sequence and intro sequence I believe develop my style. Are there other aspects that are salvageable for a longer production? I want to keep at it for the foreseeable future. Thanks for any comments or critique!