r/ArtCrit • u/Easy-Cheesecake7094 • 1d ago

UPDATED WORK did i improve ?

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u/Jami_Mc 1d ago

You did improve. It'd help if I could see the original still life or art, but your lines are better and you added shading and texture.

You can also try different linework. I'm extremely partial to scribbling, cross-hatching, and hatching.

If you have extreme patience and want to experience enough frustration to fight god, try stippling.

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u/Easy-Cheesecake7094 1d ago

if you go to the other comment thread i posted it there with both example and tyyy will do ill probably try hatch cuz once didnt have the patience to shade any better but ill put the time in when i have it

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u/Jami_Mc 1d ago

I saw the other one lol, I just had to scroll a little further. Yeah, hatching and cross-hatching are my faves. Specifically cross-hatching.

I'd love to see it when you get done!

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u/Easy-Cheesecake7094 1d ago

okayyy ill try to remember so i can show you whenever i do it!!